Alexis
People look it up & it says "helper" or "defender"
I am not much of either but I guess I try
I do not think that my parents were striving for that though
My mom changes it all the time; there is multiple reasons
"I liked that name ever since I was younger",
Or "We found it in the baby book."
But the most famous is "I always liked the car Lexus"
Gee thanks mom
Quite honestly I always preferred a nickname like "Lexi" or "Lex"
I am not a big fan of my name for some reason.
Could it be because it is a big name for boys in Puerto Rico?
I cannot answer that question but maybe one day it will come to me
I have always met more guys named Alexis than girls but hey I'm not judging
I always thought "well if I married him we could have the same name.."
Aha well then that would be cool I guess
Sometimes I think, what if my name was something different?
Would my personality be different?
Would I still be like a bottle of champagne?
Bubbly when my tops on, but when you pop it off, I burst with excitement or anger?
Well I will never get answers to any of those questions.
Ha ! That entire poem had little jokes and junk it was so funny and coot . Good job ! (: ~Ivy
ReplyDeleteThat was really good. I liked how you responded after each statement.
ReplyDeleteLex, great job! Your tone and writing style is very original and fluid. Keep up the solid writing.
ReplyDeleteI like how one of your moms reasons is because of the car. Moms just don't make any sense sometimes.
ReplyDeleteIt was different and I liked how you talked about how you were given your name.
ReplyDeleteI liked iiitttt! I enjoyed how you made it personal and you wrote it like how you would say it, very funny and nice. Good job "Lex"
ReplyDeleteI liked how you implied some of your own writing and personality to it....... I also have a little boy cousin named Alexis:)
ReplyDeleteGood job. I like the ending.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was pretty good. I liked how you actually gave thoughts on your name instead of just saying what it means.
ReplyDeleteI didn't know that there are boys named Alexis, but my name is Carson. So anything could happen. I also liked the questions you asked at the end.
ReplyDeleteI really liked yours because it was funny and angelic. I liked how you put your personality into it and how you thought of the idea of marrying a guy named Alexis. The part at the end was really good too good job .
ReplyDeleteYour poem was very good and I liked how u used a bottle of champagne to describe yourself I thought that was cool.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely loved it. I think it was the best one so far and it was really personal. I really liked how you compared your name to a bottle of champagne tho. Very creative.
ReplyDeleteI liked the format of your writing. It was very different. I also liked how you show your personality in it. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used your literary terms, also I liked the way your wrote it, Great Job!!!!!!👍😄
ReplyDeleteGood job I liked the champagne reference
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